I love the ci lyric posted above.You wrote it very concisely.It contains lots of images in a few lines.And the words are beautiful and touching. Thank you for sharing such an excellent lyric with us.词中有一种很强的艺术张力。在严寒的境地里试图抓住万种飘渺的情思。广袤的空间，古今贯通的意象，都给人极强的感染。很敬佩春在君这赤子之心。天寒地冻，多加珍重，祝身体健康，工作顺利！

沧桑几度，人生一梦，世事如斯如许。古今同慨！ 此阙句句生悲，令人唏嘘不已。

从工地回来？春在君到工地是做什么工作的？

师傅总算回来，已经许久不见师傅踪迹了。师傅回来写这么一首好词，只是天寒地冻，师傅多多保重身体。祝愿师傅，工作顺心，身体康健

工地？

So beautiful!I can sense some sorrow in it.You mut have wanted to go home.The weather is really terrible,please take on warm clothes to avoid getting cold.My English semms worse now,and if I have any mistake,please do not hesitate to piint it out.Thanks.

莲儿，回家了。好好休息。
英文文思清晰。很好啊。继续努力。
只有一处要改：take on 一般是指 deal with。例如 take on responsibilities.
穿衣 simply 用 wear 就可以了。
其他就是 typo errors，不算。例如: seems, point it out。

小诗一首，借以抒情
I Want
I want to fly
like a bird
dance with the wind
never afraid of being to high
I want to forget cry
because I want to be undaunted
never hesitate never tired
I hear wind's sigh
But what do you want to say
I think I can be the one I expect
and I want to be strong
But what are you willing to pay
I think I am willing to cost the present
to gain what I want to gain

能说的好像楼上都说了，确实好词，欣赏了。就是芦雪亭一句的典故不熟悉，于是百度了一下，嘿嘿

永遇乐
春又来，花复谢，红销翠减，物华如是。和春在君韵
霜冷红颦，雪侵香断，风锁云驻。细雨啼莺，孤村流水，花影春深处。
伊人睡起，黄昏清瘦，忆梦里秋娘渡。伴残照、西窗坐久，可怜乱红尘土。
年光记取，青梅渐老，剩有深心如许。一水盈盈，浣花人远，吟咏伤春句。
夜空静立，闲愁换酒，共胡蝶归来去。又还见、星河万里，无声落絮。

i sat there for a while这中间不错。这个有感情些，断字处可以在研究下。前年有急切，不是语速问题，是节奏。这个读的很好的。

喝火令 所谓爱情 暮雪如期至，柴门向晚深。耐寒遥望未归人。冰下水流凝涩，难舍旧来心。 梦处天边远，孤灯映泪痕。念欢欣往事缤纷。且待东风，且待杏花春，且待上苍怜顾，再和曲中音！