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【原创同人文】苍蝇王 - 未来的他们

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1楼2021-01-07 15:19回复
    20 years later, it is really a very long year, because it made two different personalities person got a huge change. Ralph, became a diplomat. On the other hand, Jack‘s job makes people a little surprised, an adventurer, the people around him agreed that he is a very irritable person.
    Today is only once a year's ball party by all famous. Ralph wearing a suit look at himself in the mirror he pulled a hint of a smile. Even after all these years, he occasionally still dream of Simon's little face, he released his feeling of guilt. "This time, Simon will have a job, " he thought. Ralph shook his head, staring at the mirror at his mature face, and said: "Be yourself, Ralph." He walked down the stairs, and feel a little cooler, he tightened the collar, got into the already prepared car, and drove away.


    2楼2021-01-07 15:19
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      In another scene, Jack is yelling: "Why don't you say that earlier?" He quickly took the servant handing clothes to wear, then he quickly glanced at the wall clock, then walked out the door.
      Outside the ball has already gathered a lot of people greeting each other and smiling. "Oh, here you are, Ralph! How are you doing?" A lady of joy greets Ralph. "I'm Fine, cute pie" Ralph smiled replies. At the same time a man with bright red short hair, runs into the crowd, "Get off my way! Get off my way!". Listening to the voice of that person, Ralph feels a little deja vu, but he can't remember who that is. Ha Ha! Is Jack, he is very unhappy now, because he is the host today, and now he should have around in the lobby greeting.


      3楼2021-01-07 15:20
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        There was another silence. Jack lowered his head as if thinking about something, he clenched his fists and looked up, then he speaks: "I've always wanted to say I'm sorry to you, about..." Jack's expression is somehow embarrassing, "about the piggy, is me indirectly caused it to happened, and I hunt down want to kill you." He turns his sight look out of the window. "This has been so for a long time, most of the things are because of ignorance, is not just your fault, perhaps we all wrong." Ralph inhaled deeply breath, take the whiskey on the table poured himself a cup. Jack turned his head to look at Ralph, the expression in his eyes is so deep can not see any mood. "I have been in the adventure, in order to find why that time I was so dark and evil, but could not find the answer", Jack finished, take a sip of liquor. Ralph quietly frowned, "perhaps because then the devil inside our soul that we released it, and now it is hidden in the depths of our soul, waiting for an opportunity to once again come out," He paused, "This time... we can not let it run outside again!" he sounds seriously then after he paused he turn to use a playful tone made it sounds like a joke, he smiled and looked at Jack. "I won't give it a chance", Jack smiled back.
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