非天夜翔《圣战之歌》
一等奖网友：meya
评论：《圣战之歌》发表时间：2014-02-28 12:56:38 所评章节：1元宵赛诗会.moonlight
moonlight（再纠错版呵呵脑残患者已尽力了）
there is a moonlight penetrating into my anima
even though I was not allowed to face my phoebe yet
my heartfelt appreciation to that casual bet
for raising the curtain of our written drama
I rushed in any path I could to get out of the dilemma
monsters lurked underground，liches shrouded in haze，hierophant with a secret
branded by your love，I fought bloody battles far beyond budget
only through the crack of psyche，the holy light reaches my alma*
I move back and forth between life and death requesting your guidance
in the tensions of ultimate pursuit，shall we touch the god we believe
even if darkness invades deep into the marrow，I will not allow your absence
I yield my heart as the unique gift and pray for acceptance
will you please treasure it since it\'s a retrieve
eventually I can stay in a world of innocence
*alma 西班牙语灵魂
既然两者都要押韵做不到各个对应那就随便意译了中英不完全一致嘛嘛
在我的生命里有一道月光
哪怕从未直视月之辉煌
我感谢那不经意的一场牌戏
引我翻开邂逅的序章
面对困境我无措张皇
深海孤峰妖域巫乡人心庙堂
烙印发出辉光骑士笼起圣像
圣光照入生命只等灵魂裂开那一道伤
在你的指引下我穿梭生死
在生命的两极信仰淡出重现真实
即便暗灵入骨我将不再孤独
我将我的心献上那是我唯一的礼物
置你心中物归原主
赦我一生无罪介福
其实如果不在乎14行诗的所谓ABBA ABBA CDC CDC
可以精简的意思当然差点
there is a moonlight in my life
before I can face the moon by myself
everything is the will of god，well no duh
straight flush imply us how a destiny chould be
trials and battles，I rushed in any path I could
monsters underground，liches ineffable，clergy was a paradox
branded by your love，I fought them without fear
only through the crack of soul，the holy light reaches
I move back and forth between life and death
close to the limit，touch the god we believe
even if darkness invades，I still believe
I yield my soul as the unique gift
will you please put me in your heart
then I can prove my innocent
哈哈哈哈哈哈嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿呼呼呼呼呼
Adios Amigo
一等奖网友：meya
评论：《圣战之歌》发表时间：2014-02-28 12:56:38 所评章节：1元宵赛诗会.moonlight
moonlight（再纠错版呵呵脑残患者已尽力了）
there is a moonlight penetrating into my anima
even though I was not allowed to face my phoebe yet
my heartfelt appreciation to that casual bet
for raising the curtain of our written drama
I rushed in any path I could to get out of the dilemma
monsters lurked underground，liches shrouded in haze，hierophant with a secret
branded by your love，I fought bloody battles far beyond budget
only through the crack of psyche，the holy light reaches my alma*
I move back and forth between life and death requesting your guidance
in the tensions of ultimate pursuit，shall we touch the god we believe
even if darkness invades deep into the marrow，I will not allow your absence
I yield my heart as the unique gift and pray for acceptance
will you please treasure it since it\'s a retrieve
eventually I can stay in a world of innocence
*alma 西班牙语灵魂
既然两者都要押韵做不到各个对应那就随便意译了中英不完全一致嘛嘛
在我的生命里有一道月光
哪怕从未直视月之辉煌
我感谢那不经意的一场牌戏
引我翻开邂逅的序章
面对困境我无措张皇
深海孤峰妖域巫乡人心庙堂
烙印发出辉光骑士笼起圣像
圣光照入生命只等灵魂裂开那一道伤
在你的指引下我穿梭生死
在生命的两极信仰淡出重现真实
即便暗灵入骨我将不再孤独
我将我的心献上那是我唯一的礼物
置你心中物归原主
赦我一生无罪介福
其实如果不在乎14行诗的所谓ABBA ABBA CDC CDC
可以精简的意思当然差点
there is a moonlight in my life
before I can face the moon by myself
everything is the will of god，well no duh
straight flush imply us how a destiny chould be
trials and battles，I rushed in any path I could
monsters underground，liches ineffable，clergy was a paradox
branded by your love，I fought them without fear
only through the crack of soul，the holy light reaches
I move back and forth between life and death
close to the limit，touch the god we believe
even if darkness invades，I still believe
I yield my soul as the unique gift
will you please put me in your heart
then I can prove my innocent
哈哈哈哈哈哈嘿嘿嘿嘿嘿呼呼呼呼呼
Adios Amigo
恭喜萌叔和其他获奖的油菜花～
飞鱼
听酒
